I think this piece shows great potential for you as an artist and I hope to see more from you. I love the concept, the layout, the flow and the colors. Keep up the great work I think you’re on to something here. A sincere artist is not one who makes a faithful attempt to put on to canvas what is in front of him, but one who tries to create something which is, in itself, a living thing and I think that is what you have achieved here today. Thank you for all your hard work, keep it up.